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"My Perfect"

When my days turn sour
The way your hair falls just right
Makes everything perfect
Chases the shadows from the night
Your smile alone
Turns the rain into sun
And makes every little chore feel like
The epitome of fun
Every touch from you is a treasure
Your smile, like priceless art
Every whisper makes me shiver
Each time I see you it makes me start
Thinking about how lucky I am to have found you
You are my perfect through and through
My dear, my darling
I'm completely yours
Please don't forget how much  I love you.
Another piece written a while ago that I am just getting to putting up.
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starell Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
This is so beautiful! The imagery is fantastic and the way you've shown love is breathtaking! Very stunning piece!
mysticbliss11 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I appreciate your kind words, thank you very much.
starell Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012
You are most welcome!
LyraJolt Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Student General Artist
I sent an angel to watch over you last night but it came back.I asked "why?"The angel said "angels don't watch over angels."Twenty one angels are IN your world. Ten of them are sleeping, Ten are playing, one is reading this message.Send this to ten friends including me. I guess if I don't get it back I'm not one of them. As soon as you get five replies, someone you love will quietly surprise you.Please read, not joking. God has seen you struggling with something. God says its over. A blessing is coming your way.If you believe in God send this message on. Please don't ignore it. You are being tested. God is going to fix two things BIG tonight in your favor. DROP Everything and pass it on. Tomorrow will be the best day of your life. Don't break this chain.Send to 14 friends in 10 minutes. It's not that hard
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